Tuesday, 2 May 2017
What I did in the holidays!
In the holidays, I went to the Gold coast in Australia, with my Nana, Popa, Brother, little Brother, little Sister, Mum, Aunty, Cousin, and last but not least, a student from China! (Yes I know, that is A LOT, of people!) In Australia, we went to Movie world, Wet'n'Wild, Sea world and The Outback (An animal sanctuary). We stayed in a really nice house while we were there, it was two story, and it had a games room with a pool in the back yard. It was really cold. Everyday we went for morning swims, and it was FREEZING!! I had to look after my little brother and sister while they were in the pool though. I had a great holiday, and hope everyone else did too!☺
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I think this is really cool you did a good job.
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